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I came across an interesting online article that eating salmon can lower blood pressure. So, I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points. Many people over 40 years old begin worrying about the number of their blood pressure. It is said that one-third of adults, about 43 million, have high blood pressure in Japan. The high blood pressure is also called "Silent Killer" and increases the risk of heart disease and stroke gradually. Especially, people in their 40s to 60s are the most generation who start having high blood pressure. It is also time to notice changes of your health easily even when you are busy with work or with chores every single day. On the other hand, it found out you just have to eat salmon to lower your blood pressure. It has been scientifically proven by the research team all over the world. The biggest reason why salmon can lower blood pressure is because omega-3 fatty acids are abundant in salmon. Our body can't produce omega-3 fatty acids and we need to get it by having meals. There are mainly two type of the acids as follows EPA(eicosapentaenoic acid): It helps improve blood flow, protect blood vessels and reduce inflammation DHA(docosahexaenoic acid): It helps keep brain heath, improve memory and study ability, and widen blood vessels How much we should eat to obtain effects? The amount of omega-3 fatty acids to lower blood pressure needs about 3 gram per day. That means we need to eat salmon of 110 to 140grams. The volume is almost one piece in a salmon fillet. The research result showed those who take a few grams of EPA and DHA per day lowered their blood pressure by average 2mmHg compared to people who don't. Lowering blood pressure by 2 to 5mmHg can reduce the risk of heart attack by about 7% and stroke by about 10%. This is the effect we can get only by eating salmon without medicines. Personally, I love salmon, but eating salmon every day might be a bit hard for me, but I would like to try that as much as possible

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I came across an interesting online article about how eating salmon may help lower blood pressure. So, I would like to summarize and share some of the interesting points. Many people over the age of 40 begin to worry about their blood pressure. It is said that about one-third of adults, or approximately 43 million people, have high blood pressure in Japan. High blood pressure is also known as a "silent killer" because it gradually increases the risk of heart disease and stroke. In particular, people in their 40s to 60s are among the age groups that are more likely to develop high blood pressure. This is also a time when people should pay more attention to changes in their health, even when they are busy with work and household chores every day. On the other hand, the article found that eating salmon may help lower blood pressure. This effect is thought to be related to the omega-3 fatty acids that are abundant in salmon. Our bodies cannot produce omega-3 fatty acids, so we need to obtain them through our diet. There are two main types of omega-3 fatty acids: EPA (eicosapentaenoic acid): It helps improve blood flow, protect blood vessels, and reduce inflammation. DHA (docosahexaenoic acid): It helps maintain brain health, support memory and learning, and widen blood vessels. How much should we eat to obtain these benefits? The article states that about 3 grams of omega-3 fatty acids per day may be needed to lower blood pressure. This means eating approximately 110 to 140 grams of salmon, which is roughly the amount in one salmon fillet. The research showed that people who consumed a few grams of EPA and DHA per day lowered their blood pressure by an average of 2 mmHg compared with people who consumed less. A reduction in blood pressure of 2 to 5 mmHg may reduce the risk of heart attack by about 7% and the risk of stroke by about 10%. This is an interesting effect that may be achieved through diet without relying solely on medication. Personally, I love sa
I couldn't correct it more because of the number of words. Level: C1. Your writing is detailed, well organised, and easy to follow. You explain the research step by step and use a good range of vocabulary related to health and nutrition. The main difficulties were with natural collocations, articles, singular and plural forms, and sentence structure. I also adjusted a few expressions that sounded too absolute in English, while keeping your original meaning. Excellent work! 😊

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