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When I was young, l used to play football. It was my favorite sport. And I always played it with my cousins and my friends. I played it in street. But now I'm not used to playing it. I love another sport. My new sport is tennis. I played it in my university with my college friends. It is very interesting.
30 Mar 2023 05:51
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When I was young, l used to play football. (American football or soccer? In English, people will understand you differently depending on where the listener is from unless you specify which you mean.) It was my favorite sport. And I always played it with my cousins and my friends. I played it in the street. But now I'm not used to playing it. I love another sport. My new sport is tennis. I played it at my university with my college friends. It is very interesting.
Almost perfect already. As for style, your sentences are especially short and staccato. There are some very successful English-language writers who write like that (Hemmingway), so it is a stylistic choice. However, I recommend using more connective structures to connect your thoughts together.
30 Mart 2023
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