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Should the teenagers Who commit the Major crime receive an adult punishment?  A horrible crime is a horrible crime and it doesn’t matter who committed it. In one hand, a teenanger couldn’t know the difference between the wrong and the right and, for this, we couldn’t  justified a punishment and we only could justified to carry the teenager to the institution where the teenager could be educated properly. In the other hand, if a teenager can commit a horrible crime then the teenager go back into the society too early will not be fair for the rest of people. In my opinion, the teenager should get the same punishment then a adult person but with more checkpoint a long that punishment where the expert people could check the teenanger features and they could improve the process, recommend other treatments and could set free the teenager if they get the conclusion that the teenager is ready to go back to the society.

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Should the teenagers who commit major crime receive an adult punishment? A horrible crime is a horrible crime and it doesn’t matter who committed it. On one hand, a teenager might not know the difference between wrong and right and, because of this, we can’t justify a punishment. We can only justify placing the teenager in an institution where the teenager could be educated properly. On the other hand, if a teenager can commit a horrible crime, sending the teenager back into society too early will not be fair for the rest of the people. In my opinion, the teenager should get the same punishment as an adult person, but with more checkpoints along that punishment where the expert could check the teenager’s progress and they could improve the process, recommend other treatments and could set the teenager free if they come to the conclusion that the teenager is ready to go back to society.
Be careful with your prepositions, in and on (but we can also blame autocorrect for that!).

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