“But Lacan's basic thesis, at least in his last works, is that there is a possibility for the subject to obtain some contents, some kind of positive consistency, also outside the big Other, the alienating symbolic network.”——引用自由Verso出版于2008年的《The Sublime Object of Ideology》
以上英文翻译成以下中文，是否有问题？
“但是拉康的基本观点，至少是他的晚期著作中的基本观点，是这样的:离开了大对体 (the big Other) ，离开了发挥异化功能的符号网络 (alienating symbolic network) ，主体无法获得内容，无法获得实证一致性 (positive consistency)。”

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Your original:

But Lacan's basic thesis, at least in his last works, is that there is a possibility for the subject to obtain some contents, some kind of positive consistency, also outside the big Other, the alienating symbolic network.

My Chinese version of the original:

但是拉康的基本论点---至少 在他的最后几部作品中是这种观点---那就是： 存在着主体获得某些内容的可能性，（也）存在着主题获得某种积极的连贯性的可能性，还有（即使），离开了大对体（the big Other), 离开了异化功能的符号网络(alienating symbolic network), 依然存在上述可能性。

Grammatical analysis: 
The original = 
But Lacan's basic thesis, at least in his last works, is that there is a possibility for the subject to obtain some contents, ( there is a possibility for the subject to obtain) some kind of positive consistency, also outside the big Other, (outside) the alienating symbolic network,  (there is  still a possibility for the subject to obtain some contents,  some kind of positive consistency).
 
英语句子往往具有简洁性，这儿根据自身内容所辐射的语境，出现了高度省略。但是理解原文应当看到这种被省略的东西，才可能翻译出正确的汉语译文。
(  With English sentence often having conciseness,here, by the context radiated by its own content, there  comes a high level of ellipsis. However, to correctly understand the original ,one should see such omitted things so as to  get correct Chinese translation.)

I am a Chinese, with my English being extremely limited, I just casually offer my Chinese version whose correctness  I don't really dare to ensure.)
(我是中国人，由于英语水非常非常有限，我只是胡乱地提供我的汉语译文(我真的不敢保证其正确性))

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