1. “My eagerness for studying Buddhism” → “my eagerness to study Buddhism” • “Eagerness to study” is more natural than “eagerness for studying.” 2. “Sharing some experiences of cooking and shopping” → “share my experiences with cooking and mindful shopping” • “Some experiences of” sounds awkward. “Share my experiences with” is smoother. • “Mindful shopping” makes it clearer that you’re talking about making thoughtful choices. 3. “I think cooking and shopping wisely is very important” → “I believe that cooking and making wise shopping choices are essential” • “I believe that” is a more formal and natural way to introduce this idea. • “Making wise shopping choices” is clearer than “shopping wisely.” • “Essential” sounds stronger than “very important.”