I went to the museum with my friend. The museum had exhibits about the history of the opening of the port, the old townscape, and earthquake. I think it was a great opportunity because I don't think I

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I went to the museum with my friend. The museum had exhibits about the history of the opening of the port, the old townscape, and earthquake. I think it was a great opportunity because I don't think I would have gone if my friend hadn't invited me. Also, it was a better experience than I expected, as I saw books written in old Japanese and Ukiyo-e prints that I had seen before. After that, we saw the autumn leaves. I saw this in Tokyo before, but I was surprised to see that there were so many trees right near the school. I went to Chinatown and ate meat buns shaped like pandas. I went there for the first time in a while and was surprised by the number of foreigners. There were tourists all along the road, all enjoying their food. We then ate a large piece of chicken. It's about the size of our face. At first, it tasted delicious, but I started to feel that it was too oily. After that, I had a part-time job, so I hurried home. Even though I only spent 3 hours with my friends, I was surprised to see that I walked over 13,000 steps. It was my first holiday in a while and it was fun.

4 Ara 2023 08:37

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I went to the museum with my friends. The museum had exhibits about the history of the opening of the port, the old townscape, and earthquake. I think it was a great opportunity because I don't think I would have gone if my friends hadn't invited me. Also, it was a better experience than I expected, as I saw books written in old Japanese and Ukiyo-e prints that I had seen before. After that, we saw the autumn leaves. I saw it in Tokyo before, but I was surprised to see that there were so many trees right near the school. I went to Chinatown and ate meat buns shaped like pandas. I went there for the first time in a while and was surprised by the number of foreigners. There were tourists all along the road, all enjoying their food. We then ate a large piece of chicken. It's about the size of our face. At first, it tasted delicious, but I started to feel that it was too oily. After that, I had a part-time job, so I hurried home. Even though I only spent 3 hours with my friends, I was surprised to see that I walked over 13,000 steps. It was my first holiday in a while and it was fun.

Hello, I am Nami the assistant of this class. Great writing!! It looks like you had a fulfilling time, even though it was only for 3 hours. I think I went to the same museum as you last year. I also need a trigger, like friends inviting me to go somewhere like a museum. When I went last year, it was for my report. I would like to go to Chinatown and eat delicious food there too. There were only few places I corrected. At the first part of the writing, you wrote "friend" but at the end you wrote "friends". If it is more than two or more people than you should put a "s" at the end. Or if it was just one friend at the beginning and you gathered up with other friends too, you should write that you met up with other friends and went to Chinatown.

5 Aralık 2023

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