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Today, I went running. Actually, I hadn't run for 1 or two months. I decided to try a circlular path that I had never attempted before. The loop was very long, which had 13 kilometers so I jogged slowly. To be honest, running the entire circle was really exhausting. I didn't dare try completing the full loop again. When I reached the 10 kilometers, my legs were very painful that I became difficult to keep running. So I altenated between walking and jogging to finish the circle. The scenery along the circle was very beautiful but I was too tired to enjoy it. I kept going until the sunset and the moon rose. Unfortunately, I started feeling cold and lost my appetite. I think I might have gotten a fever, possibly from the nighttime wind. 今天去跑步了,其实已经有1,2个月没有跑了。今天决定跑完那一圈,其实我之前一直没有试过。我一直都是慢跑,因为路很长,有13多公里。说真的,跑步真的好累,跑完这一次,我不敢再次尝试跑完一圈了。跑到10公里,我的腿已经痛得不行了,很难去跑起来,所以我后面的都是走路或者偶尔跑跑。沿途的风景很美但是我好累很难去欣赏。跑到太阳落山到月亮升起。回到家后我发现我有点冷,也吃不下东西,感觉感冒了
12 May 2025 16:55
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Today, I went running. Actually, I hadn't run for one or two months. I decided to try to run a lap but I had never tried it before. The road was very long, about 13 kilometers so I jogged slowly. To be honest, running the entire lap was really exhausting. I didn't dare trying to run the full lap again. When I reached the 10th kilometer, my legs started to feel very painful and it became difficult to keep running. So, I alternated between walking and jogging to finish the lap. The scenery along the way was very beautiful but I was too tired to enjoy it. I kept going until the sun set and the moon rose. Unfortunately, after I went back home I started feeling cold and lost my appetite. I think I might have gotten a fever, possibly from the nighttime wind. 今天去跑步了,其实已经有1,2个月没有跑了。今天决定跑完那一圈,其实我之前一直没有试过。我一直都是慢跑,因为路很长,有13多公里。说真的,跑步真的好累,跑完这一次,我不敢再次尝试跑完一圈了。跑到10公里,我的腿已经痛得不行了,很难去跑起来,所以我后面的都是走路或者偶尔跑跑。沿途的风景很美但是我好累很难去欣赏。跑到太阳落山到月亮升起。回到家后我发现我有点冷,也吃不下东西,感觉感冒了
Take enough time to recover and try to go for a shorter run next time. Once you feel that your stamina has increased a bit then try to go for a longer run.
12 May 2025 17:31
Today, I went running. Actually, I hadn't run for 1 or two months. I decided to try a circular path that I had never attempted before. The loop was very long, and was 13 kilometers, so I jogged slowly. To be honest, running the entire circle was really exhausting. I didn't dare trying completing/to complete the full loop again. When I reached 10 kilometers, my legs were so painful that it became difficult to keep running. So I alternated between walking and jogging to finish the circle. The scenery along the circle was very beautiful but I was too tired to enjoy it. I kept going until the sun set and the moon rose. Unfortunately, I started feeling cold and lost my appetite. I think I might have gotten a fever, possibly from the nighttime wind. 今天去跑步了,其实已经有1,2个月没有跑了。今天决定跑完那一圈,其实我之前一直没有试过。我一直都是慢跑,因为路很长,有13多公里。说真的,跑步真的好累,跑完这一次,我不敢再次尝试跑完一圈了。跑到10公里,我的腿已经痛得不行了,很难去跑起来,所以我后面的都是走路或者偶尔跑跑。沿途的风景很美但是我好累很难去欣赏。跑到太阳落山到月亮升起。回到家后我发现我有点冷,也吃不下东西,感觉感冒了
Great! I will just mention that "sunset" is a noun, and is usually used without an article. If you wanted a verb, you would need to have "the sun set."
12 May 2025 17:11
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