Tuck Everlasting 1
I think a Ferris wheel is a splendid metaphor for the story. There are key three characters- Tuck family, Winne Foster and a stranger- at the rim of the wheel and here comes the wood as a hub which connects those three characters altogether. The story is getting interesting as Winne finally was out of her family’s small cottage and headed to the wood. In the wood she happened to see Mrs. Mae’s son Jesse driking water from the mysterious spring. It seemed like Winne had a crush on Jesse at the first moment she saw him. When Winnie tried to drink some water like Jesse did, Jesse was upset and panicked for no reason. Fortunately on the middle of arguing with Winne, his mother Mrs. Mae and older brother Miles appreared and Mrs. Mae said “here it is. The worst is happening at last”. I guess Tuck family has a secret about their aging and the spring would be the answer and the family that the stranger was looking for would be Tuck family.
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Tuck Everlasting 1
I think a Ferris wheel is a splendid metaphor for the story. There are three key characters: the Tuck family, Winnie Foster, and a stranger. These characters are at the rim of the wheel, and here comes the woods is the hub that connects these three characters altogether. The story became interesting when Winnie finally was out of left her family’s small cottage and headed to the woods. In the woods, she happened to see Mrs. Mae’s son, Jesse, drinking water from the mysterious spring. It seemed like Winnie had a crush on Jesse from the first moment she saw him. When Winnie tried to drink some water like Jesse had done, Jesse was upset and panicked for no reason. Fortunately, in the middle of arguing with Winnie, his mother, Mrs. Mae, and older brother, Miles, appeared. Mrs. Mae said, “Here it is, the worst is happening at last.”. I guess that the Tuck family has a secret about their aging and the spring is the answer, and that the family the stranger is looking for is the Tuck family.
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Tuck Everlasting 1
I think a Ferris wheel is a splendid metaphor for the story in Tuck Everlasting. There are three key characters- the Tuck family, Winne Foster and a stranger at the rim of the wheel and here comes the wood as a hub which connects those three characters altogether. The story got interesting as Winne was finally out of (finally left) her family’s small cottage and headed to the woods. In the woods she happened to see Mrs. Mae’s son Jesse drinking water from a mysterious spring. It seemed like Winne had a crush on Jesse at the first moment she saw him. When Winnie tried to drink some water like Jesse did, Jesse was (became) upset and panicked for no reason. Fortunately in the middle of arguing with Winne, Jesse's mother Mrs. Mae and his older brother Miles appreared and Mrs. Mae said “here it is. The worst is happening at last”. I guess theTuck family has a secret about their aging and the spring would be the answer and the family that the stranger was looking for would be Tuck family.
Note:
Usually when we tell a story, we use the present tense.
The story gets interesting when Winnie leaves her house and goes into the woods. There she happens to see Jesse....
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