First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i am basel abuhassa 25 years old from Palestine , born in ksa i finished my high school in ksa 2003 then i came to gaza i start studding in unevircity in 2006 then i graduated in 2010 . i work as photographer in media company i live in my father house i like action movies i start learning English 6 month ago now i wanna more practicing
Çeşitli İngilizce öğretmenleri arasından arama yapın...
Düzeltmeler · 3
0
Hello Basel, your English is good for a new learner. You just missed some little things, such as the punctuation, past tense form, possessive pronoun, and some mistyped words. I'll try to correct them. Here we go..
I am basel abuhassa, 25 years old from Palestine. I was born in ksa. I finished my high school in ksa in 2003, then I came to gaza. I started studying in a university in 2006, then I graduated in 2010. I work as photographer in media company. I live in my father's house. I like action movies. I started learning English 6 month ago. now I wanna have more practicing practice.
0
Hello there! You just need some improvements in capitalization, spelling of words and tenses. Do you want to learn English? How to be fluent especially in conversation and writing? I can offer help at an affordable rate. Hope to hear from you soon.
Daha hızlı mı ilerlemek istiyorsun?
Bu öğrenme topluluğuna katıl ve ücretsiz alıştırmaları dene!
Evden çıkmadan dil öğrenme fırsatını kaçırmayın. Deneyimli dil eğitmenlerimizden oluşan seçkimize göz atın ve ilk dersinize şimdi kaydolun!
Bugün öğrenmeye başlayın
