>I've also read your notebook entry and realized that you've written your sentences informally but then added です at the end. Nuha, I see your point, but let me say this for her that it works that you write something and put です at the end without thinking too much. 敬語Keigo is really hard/ めんどくさい even for us Japanse. And important is not that you write perfect 敬語 but that the reader will not be left uncomfortable. "Putting ます without thinking too much " kind of strategy will work in this sense.

I've also read your notebook entry and realized that you've written your sentences informally but then added です at the end. This is incorrect. A good way to fix this is to learn the ます form. Here's a video I recommend you to watch: https://youtu.be/vEkYj0WJdBk

I'm also learning Japanese like you so I can't really correct you. However, I did notice you wrote the particle は like わ twice. The second time is pretty understandable since I also sometimes accidentally type わ instead of は because of pronunciation. However, こんにちは and こんばんは are irregular and actually have は at the end even though it's pronounced as わ.