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About My First Flight Today's my journal is about my first flight to foreign country. It was when I was a high school student. I felt very scared because the airplane was vibrating all the time and I had strange feeling when the airplane took off. But, in these days I used to take airplane as a business trip. Sometimes I want to remember the first impression or feeling of the airplane.

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About My First Flight

Today's my journal is about my first flight to a foreign country. It was when I was a high school student.
I felt very scared because the airplane was vibrating all the time and I had a strange feeling when the airplane took off.
But, in these days I am used to taking an airplane for a business trip. Sometimes I want to remember the first impression or feeling of the airplane.

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