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Part of a letter My daughter often teases her brother and competes with him for his father. Back home to make her happy, can eat a lot of her favorite things, can also be soft on the sofa play mobile phone. But she also did not forget to learn, every day adhere to the contact dance. During the limited weekend, I took her on a three-day trip to Zhoushan Islands. Eat seafood and see the beach. On the way back, we were caught in a traffic jam. Dozens of kilometers of roads are full of cars. It took us nine hours to get home.

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My daughter often teases her brother and competes with him for their father['s attention]. Back home, to make her happy, she can eat ate a lot of her favorite things [foods], can also be soft lay on the sofa and played on her mobile phone. But she also did not forget to learn [practice or study?], and every day she adheres to the contact dance [I don't know what you mean by "adheres to the contact dance" so I can't correct it. Adhere means stick to/with, as in a schedule or routine, but contact dance is a type of improvisational dance that would be something that you would work on, study, or practice, but not adhere to. If you tell me more about this contact dance and what you meant here, I can help you find better words].

During the limited long weekend [we use the word long to talk about 3-,4-, and 5-day weekends. Limited implies that it was shorter than usual, but a 3-day trip is longer than the usual 2-day weekend], I took her on a three-day trip to the Zhoushan Islands. Eat We ate seafood and saw [or went to] the beach. On the way back, we were caught in a traffic jam and for dozens of kilometers the roads were full of cars. It took us nine hours to get home.

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