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Some people live in their home town their whole lives. Discuss the causes or effects........
Some people live in their home town their whole lives. Discuss the causes or effects of staying in one’s hometown forever. OR discuss the causes or effects of moving to a different city OR country.
Knowledge and expertise are the main target in this modern World. As result, People, who want to increase their skills, look for these advancements in other places where they can learn languages, find convenient facilities, and have a better job opportunity. On the last years, more and more people move in a different city for these reasons.
First of all, cities offer a variegate kind of job opportunities. Cities are places where modern shopping are opened, new factories are build, and new technology is introduced. As result, many students decide to move in cities after their university courses to look for a job; for example to work in a research centre in the university. Furthermore, entire families move in cities for the similar reasons, that is, to look for a more convenient employment. This huge movement of people brings a cultural exchange as well.
Secondly, in cities people can meet foreigners, so that they can increase their language skills. In fact, there are many tourists and foreign workers around the cities and people can interact with them, know different culture, and learn other languages. Moreover, in the cities there are schools and universities for foreign people; place where there is a huge cultural exchange. This big movement of people in the city give a boost to services.
Finally, in a large area such as city people need more facilities than in small town. Therefore, it is easy to find everything for everyone. In fact, in the big centre it is easier to find particular shops such as antiquarian bookshops, vintage music shops, or car boot shops. Furthermore, the bigger stadiums, monuments, and parks are in this kind of places, and people appreciate a lot these kind of amenities.
In conclusion, languages, convenient facilities, and job opportunity are the main targets that a person look for in this modern world and it is very difficult find these things in small towns or village. Globalization has created a new modern image of culture and employment, so people want to live in a concentrated area to have that.
22 Mar 2020 17:55
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Some people live in their home town their whole lives. Discuss the causes or effects........
Some people live in their home town their whole lives. Discuss the causes or effects of staying in one’s hometown forever. OR discuss the causes or effects of moving to a different city OR country.
Knowledge and expertise are the main targets in this modern world. As result, people who want to increase their skills look for these advancements in other places where they can learn languages, find convenient facilities, and have a better job opportunity. Over the last years, more and more people move <s>in</s> to a different city for these reasons.
First of all, cities offer <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</s> varied kinds of job opportunities. Cities are places where modern shopping centres are opened, new factories are built, and new technology is introduced. As result, many students decide to move <s>in</s> to cities after their university courses to look for a job; for example to work in a research centre in the university. Furthermore, entire families move <s>in</s> to cities for <s>the</s> similar reasons, that is, to look for <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</s> more convenient employment. This huge movement of people brings a cultural exchange as well.
Secondly, in cities, people can meet foreigners, so that they can increase their language skills. In fact, there are many tourists and foreign workers around the cities and people can interact with them, get to know a different culture, and learn other languages. Moreover, in the cities there are schools and universities for foreign people; places where there is a huge cultural exchange. This big movement of people <s>in</s> to the city gives a boost to services.
Finally, in a large area such as a city, people need more facilities than in small town. Therefore, it is easy to find everything for everyone. In fact, in <s>the</s> a big centre it is easier to find particular shops such as antique bookshops, vintage music shops, or car boot shops. Furthermore, the bigger stadiums, monuments, and parks are in these kinds of places, and people really appreciate <s>a lot</s> these kinds of amenities.
In conclusion, languages, convenient facilities, and job opportunities are the main targets that a person looks for in this modern world and it is very difficult to find these things in small towns or villages. Globalization has created a new, modern image of culture and employment, so people want to live in a concentrated area to have that.
Ciao Stefano. Not too bad. Keep practicing! Simón.
22 Mart 2020
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