My journey in the security exchange
In November of 2017 I listened an audiobook called "Rich Dad Poor Dad" which talks about being rich in the financial market.
At that time, the days were dark, and the nights even darker.
In 2018 I started to study the financial market in depth.
I pondered about many things. The days became darker and darker.
The more I studied, the more I found out that I needed to understand more.
The more I found out, the more my wish for power increased.
The more my wish increased, the more I found out that "risk" and "uncertainty" are things which will be always present in our lives.
Like death: it's always in front of us, but we never know what is going to happen in the next second, and whether it's going to attack us or not.
In September of 2019, I started to operate in the financial market. This market is called "futures market".
A more dangerous, involving more risk market.
A market in which someone protects itself while the other accepts completely the risk.
Basically, my total loss is about -$300,00 until now.
Curiously, I'm in peace. I know it's hard to understand, but I see things clearly, the opportunities seems so close.
Yesterday, I almost got an opportunity in which I would retrieve all my losses until the moment and I would earn profits, in a single day!
Due to the crash in the worldwide security exchanges, in March it was harder to operate, and the losses increased a bit.
Who are longer in the market says: any loss you'll get, it'll be a lesson. The market will be your bigger teacher.
What do you think about it?
Thank you very much for reading my text.
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My journey in the security exchange
In November of 2017 I listened to an audiobook called "Rich Dad Poor Dad" which talks about being rich in the financial market.
At that time, the days were dark, and the nights even darker.
In 2018 I started to study the financial market in depth.
I pondered [about] many things. The days became darker and darker.
The more I studied, the more I found out that I needed to understand more.
The more I found out, the more my wish for power increased.
The more my wish increased, the more I found out that "risk" and "uncertainty" are things which will always be present in our lives.
Like death: it's always in front of us, but we never know what is going to happen in the next second, and whether it's going to attack us or not.
In September of 2019, I started to operate in the financial market. This market is called "the futures market".
It is a more dangerous market, involving more risk*; a market in which someone protects themselves while the other accepts the entire risk.
Basically, my total loss is about -$300,00 until now.
Curiously, I'm at peace. I know it's hard to understand, but I see things clearly, the opportunities seems so close.
Yesterday, I almost got an opportunity in which I would retrieve all my losses until the moment and I would earn profits, in a single day!
Due to the crash in the worldwide security exchanges, in March it was harder to operate, and the losses increased a bit.
Someone who has been in the market longer says**: any loss you get, will be a lesson. The market will be your biggest teacher.
What do you think about it?
Thank you very much for reading my text.
*=I'm not sure if I have understood this correctly because there doesn't seem to be a verb in the sentence so I can't quite tell what you mean.
**=I'm not sure if you're talking about one specific person. You could also write "People who have spent longer in the market usually say..."
Very good work! It's a difficult topic but you have made very few mistakes.
I'm british and I use slightly different terminology from an American writer like Robert Kiyosaki but are you sure you mean "the futures market"? People who start out in investing usually trade on the stock market and I think it would be quite unusual to trade in the futures market. Please be careful. It sounds like you've done a lot of research which is great, but I have definitely learned a lot by trading ordinary stocks and shares. I can imagine it's easy to lose a lot of money in the futures market in volatile markets like these, so make sure you are only risking money you can afford to lose! I'm sure Robert Kiyosaki has already told you this but I'm saying it too!
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