My worst holidays
Hi Albert.
I going to tell you about my last holidays.
Last summer in July I went to camping in San Sebastian.
Before to leave I saw the weather forecast on Internet and it was sunny. But after was raining all days.
Camping look like comfortable on the website with swimming pool and green grass. But after the swimming pool was empty and the grass was dry.
I put a complaint at reception however the staff was unfriendly and insensitive.
You don't have to go to this camping. If I were you I'll go to lovely hotel. I would read the comments on the website before. San Sebastian is beautiful but the beach is crowded. You must go in the morning. The food is delicious you could eat in several restaurants in the street. You shouldn't eat mussels. I was ill after to eat mussels.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!!
Moisés.
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My worst holidays
Hi Albert.
I am going to tell you about my last holidays.
Last summer in July, I went to camping in San Sebastian.
Before to leave leaving, I saw the weather forecast on the internet, and it which was for sunny weather. But afterwards, it was raining all days rained everyday.
Camping had looked like comfortable on the website, with a swimming pool and green grass, but after the swimming pool was empty and the grass was dry.
I put a complaint in at reception, however the staff was were unfriendly and insensitive.
You don't have to go to this camping. If I were you, I'll I would go to a lovely hotel and I would read the comments on the website before going. San Sebastian is beautiful but the beach is crowded. You must go in the morning. The food is delicious and you could eat in several restaurants in on the street. You shouldn't eat mussels. I was ill after to eat eating mussels.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!!
Moisés.
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My worst holidays
Hi Albert.
I going to tell you about my last holiday.
Last summer in July I went to camping in San Sebastian.
Before leaving I saw the weather forecast on the Internet and it was sunny. But after when I got there it was raining every day.
Camping lookEd like comfortable on the website with a swimming pool and green grass. But after when I got there the swimming pool was empty and the grass was dry.
I put in a complaint at reception however the staff was unfriendly and insensitive.
You don't have to go to this camping site. If I were you I’d go to a lovely hotel. I would read the comments on the website beforehand . San Sebastian is beautiful but the beach is crowded. You must go in the morning. The food is delicious, you could eat in several restaurants in the street. You shouldn't eat mussels. I was ill after eating mussels.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!!
Moisés.
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My worst holidays
Hi Albert.
I am going to tell you about my last holidays.
Last summer in July I went camping in San Sebastian.
Before I left, I checked the weather forecast on Internet and it was supposed to be sunny. But it actually was raining every day!
The camping site looked comfortable on the website with a swimming pool and green grass. But in reality, the swimming pool was empty and the grass was dry.
I put in a complaint at reception however the staff were unfriendly and insensitive.
You don't have to go to this camping. If I were you I would go to lovely hotel. I would read the comments on the website beforehand. San Sebastian is beautiful but the beach is crowded. You must go in the morning to avoid the crowds. The food is delicious you can eat in several restaurants on the street. You shouldn't eat mussels. I was ill after I ate mussels.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!!
Moisés.
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