The meeting between me and my 2 best friends for a year didn't meet A year has passed, since we finished the university entrance exam. Each person a school, gradually the conversation is less. Until t

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Nguyễn Phương Linh

The meeting between me and my 2 best friends for a year didn't meet A year has passed, since we finished the university entrance exam. Each person a school, gradually the conversation is less. Until the end of the freshman year, on May 31, 2020 we met again. Last year, we would often go out to eat, take photos. But everyone seemed to be changing in Hanoi, so we chose to go to the movie shopping and shopping mall. The friendship hasn't changed much, we are still very close. Promise each other that, no matter what new relationship, your friendship will not change. And will go to the most beautiful places in Hanoi Capital.

5 Haz 2020 03:11

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<ol><li>The meeting between me and my 2 best friends for a year didn't meet</li></ol>

Thường thì tiếng Anh sẽ diễn đạt ngắn gọn hơn so với tiếng Việt mình nhiều lắm, nên cái cụm "for a year didn't meet" (em thậm chí còn thiếu chủ ngữ trong cái mệnh đề này này) nó hơi dài dòng lôi thôi. Tốt hơn hết nên là after a year

<ol><li>Promise each other that, no matter what new relationship, your friendship will not change. And will go to the most beautiful places in Hanoi Capital.</li></ol>

Cả 2 câu này đều thiếu chủ ngữ, em có nhìn ra không :)) Với lại bình thường trong tiếng Việt, chúng ta cũng chẳng mấy khi nói Thủ đô Hà Nội. Tiếng Anh cũng thế, không ai nói Hanoi Capital cả. Hanoi thôi là được rồi.

6 Haziran 2020

The meeting between me and my 2 best friends after a year

A year has passed since we matriculated. For each person at school, gradually the conversation is less. At the end of the freshman year, on May 31, 2020 we met again.

Last year, we would often go out to eat, take photos. But everyone seemed to be changing in Hanoi, so we chose to go to the movies and the shopping mall.

Our friendship hasn't changed much, we are still very close. We promise each other that, no matter what new relationship comes up, our friendship will not change. And we will go to the most beautiful places in Hanoi, our Capital.

5 Haziran 2020