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The street cat became my family. When I came back home from work about six months ago, I accidently found the street cat sitting calmly on my drive way and since then she has become one of my family members. The first thing when I decided to keep her inside was to give her the name. After thinking for a while I decided to call her "Nero". I used to more like a dog than a cat , however after keeping it in a couple of months, now I like the cat better than before for the following reasons. First, the cat was kind and friendly than I thought while she has sharp teeth, claws, and no facial expressions than dogs. It's because that the cat has a way of greeting when I come back home; Nero apporchs me friendly and say hello with a way of expressing of a cat instead of ignoring or running away. Second, the cat dosen't require a lot of attention than dog. I had to pay attention to my dog when I had to leave the house for a while. I ended up asking someone to take Nero for me while I was out of town. It was because that the dog was dependable amimal compair to the cat. for example, now I just left enough food and water for my cat without concerning about her when we leave for family weekend trips. Third, a cat is very likely clean amimal, and don't need to be warry about the barking issue at night at all. The cat can clean herself all the time, so I don't need to give her the bath regurally to get rid of the bad smell. On the contrary I needed to give a bath constantly when I had a dog. Consequentially, I became a mania of cat as there are a lot of merits of keeping a cat. However, I don't want to have a lot of cats in my house as I am allergic to cat a little bit resulting in using the air purifier to get rid of antigen. I recommend someone who like to have a pet to have a cat instead of keeping a dog. But remember that you need to have a air purifier in case you are allergic to a cat hair

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The street cat who became my family.


When I came back home from work about six months ago, I accidentally found a the  street cat sitting calmly on my driveway, and since then she has become one of my family members. The first thing did when I decided to keep her inside was to give her the a name. After thinking for awhile I decided to call her "Nero". I used to more like a dogs than a cats, however, after keeping it in a couple of months, now I like the cat better than before for the following reasons:. 

First, the cat was kind and friendliery than I thought, althoughwhile she has sharper teeth, and claws, and has no facial expressions like than dogs. It's because that the cat has a way of greeting when I come back home; Nero appoaches rchs me in a friendly way and says hello with a way of expressing of as a cat instead of ignoring or running away. 

Second, the cat doesn't require a lot of attention than compared to a dog. I had to pay attention to my dog when I had to leave the house for awhile. I ended up asking someone to take Nero for me while I was out of town. It was because that the dog was dependentable animal comparedir to the cat. fFor example, now I just leaveft enough food and water for my cat without concerning myself about her when we leave for family weekend trips. 

Third, a cat is very likely to be a clean anmimal, and I don't need to be warry about the barking issue at night at all. The cat can clean herself all the time, so I don't need to give her the a bath regularlyrally to get rid of the bad smell. On the contrary, I needed to give a bath constantly when I had a dog. 

Consequentially, I became a maniafan of cats as there are a lot of merits of keeping a cat. However, I don't want to have a lot of cats in my house, as I am allergic to cats a little bit, resulting in using the an air purifier to get rid of antigens. I recommend to someone who likes to have a pet to have a cat instead of keeping a dog. But remember that you need to have an air purifier in case you are allergic to a cat hair.

 

Wow, I hope someday my Korean is this good!  

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When I took this picture, I was about to install the attic fan. She looked curious about why I wanted to enter into the attic. While I was installing the fan, surely she climbed up the ladder and stayed with me till I complitely finished the job. She looked she was enjoying to be in an attic with me. She must be thinking on she would get something from the corner of attic.
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아이구 너무 귀여워요!
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Hi Kison:-) I love your cat, she's adorable!
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I ended up asking someone to take Nero for me ----> I ended up asking someone to take my dog for me. I wish the italki provided an edit option after posting it.

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