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Yiming Wu
One Important Thing in Chinese Learning Concerning the complexity of every culture, language learning is never easy, so it is in the Chinese learning, especially for the western learners when there’s a huge difference between us. Attitude, I think, is always important, which like an engine, gives you force and encouragement throughout your learning process. Whether you have the right attitude in studying determines the time you can spend on it, and time forever is the basic element in everything. We all know the difference between something I want to do and something I need to do, saying China’s English teaching and Canada’s French teaching. But where does the right attitude come from? From your colleague, your boss, your Chinese friend, the Chinese food or kung fu, they are all OK. If only you have interest in it, the more time you spend on it, the more closer you can get into. Maybe at first it is just a point, a lot of points come into a line, numerous lines form a surface, countless surfaces let you comes into the real China. So find your point and grow it by time!

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One  An important thing in about learning Chinese. Learning

 

Concerning the complexity of every culture [This sentence is correct but is used incorectly in regards to the following sentence], Language learning is never easy, so to then is  it is in the with [I think this is the phrase you were looking for, it's slightly archiac though] Chinese. learning. Especially for the western learners when  Where there’s exists a huge difference between the two languages. us.

I believe attitude, I think, is always important, which like an engine, gives you force  drive and encouragement throughout your the learning process. Whether you have the right attitude in studying determines the how much time you're willing to can spend on it. and Time, as ever, forever is the basic element in any endevour. everything. We all know the difference between something "I want to do" and something "I need to do" [Here you could also use italics for the parts in quotation marks, both indicate what would be stressed in speech], saying China’s English teaching and Canada’s French teaching. [I don't understand what you mean by this] 

But where does the right attitude come from? From your colleague?, your boss, your A Chinese friend?, the Chinese food? or Kung Fu?, they are They're all sources of inspiration OK. If only you have All you need is an interest in something it, and the dedication to devote enough time to it the more time you spend on it, and your goals will follow. the more closer you can get into.

 

Maybe Perhaps [In formal writing, generally, perhaps sounds better than maybe which sounds slightly informal] at first your progress is a dot on the page it is just a point, a lotof few points dots come together to form into a line, numerous lines form an image a surface, countless images surfaces let you comes into the create a picture of the real China.

So find your point dot and grow it! by time!

 

 

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One Important Thing in (or "about") Chinese Learning

Concerning the complexity of every culture, language learning (or "learning a new language") is never easy, such as when so it is in the one is learning Chinese learning, especially for the Western learners, when there's such a huge difference between us.

Attitude, I think, is always (or "very") important, which like an engine, gives you force and encouragement throughout your learning process. Whether you have the right attitude in studying determines the time you are willing to can spend on it, and time forever is forever the basic element in everything. We all know the difference between something one I wants to do, and something one I needs to do, for example, those who need to learn English in China, and those that must learn French in Canada. saying China’s English teaching and Canada’s French teaching.

But where does the right attitude come from? Whether it is from your colleague, your boss, your Chinese friend, a passion for the Chinese food, or an interest in kung fu, they are all OK (or "okay"). If only you maintain an have interest in it, and the more time you spend more and more time on it, the more closer you will have a better chance at can getting to your language speaking goal into. (or: "The more you keep an interest in it, the more time you spend on it, the closer you will get to your goal.") Maybe at first it is just like a point, then later a lot of these points form come into a line, then these numerous lines form a surface, and then these countless surfaces allow let you comes into to understand the real China.

So find your point and it will grow in good it by time!

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I didn't read the previous correction, but I tried to preserve as much of your own writing as possible whilst making it sound as native as possible, without adding too much myself. The parts where I did (such as the metaphor you used) was to make it more understandable to a native reader - for instance although I understood what you meant by your metaphor, "surface" is defiantly the wrong word to use. Hope this helps! :)
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This was well written, I especially like the analogy about the "point" and "surfaces" at the end. Keep up the good work!

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