Where do you live?  I live in Michigan, USA. (I don't tell the city on italki.com)

I have bought a book that's written in English.
It is very interesting book about New York.
New York is the city of my dreams. I want to work and live in it. Really?

Where do you live?  I live in Michigan, USA
Where do you want to live?  I want to live in Korea one day.
Do you have a favorite city?   No, I don't.
Or maybe you already live in your lovely city? Where I live is okay.
Please tell me.
I think it is very interesting.   Me too!

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Where do you live?

I have bought a book in English.
It is very interesting book about New York.
New York is a city of my dreams. I want to work and live in it.

Where do you live? Where do you want to live? Do you have a favourite city?
Or maybe you already live in your lovely city?
Please tell me.
I think it is very interesting.

Hello. How about:

"I bought a  very interesting book about New York that is written in English. 
New York is the city of my dreams. I want to work and live there.

Where do you live? Where do you want to live? Do you have a favourite city? 
Or maybe you already love where you live? Please tell me. I think it is very interesting."