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Andrea
A terrible day I am vary upset today.When I returned my dorm,I put my ipad on the bed to charge it.But when I went on the bed,ipad fulled off the bed.It broken.although it is the conner,but looks like not perfect anymore.The second thing is about the partner,I regard him as a good friend,I can not believe he delete me,but why?give me a reason,please.I am a so kind to get along with.Whatever,the bad things go to hell,tomorrow is another day,a perfect day. Thanks for looking it.
3 May 2013 16:14
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A terrible day

I am very upset today.When I returned my dorm,I put my ipad on the bed to charge it.But when I went on the bed, the ipad fell off the bed.It broke.although it is the conner, it doesn't look perfect anymore.The second thing is about the partner,I regard him as a good friend,I can not believe he deleted me,but why?give me a reason,please.I am a so kind to get along with.Whatever,the bad things go to hell,tomorrow is another day,a perfect day.
Thanks for looking it over.



Your English is pretty good. I could understand everything you were saying. Your last sentence doesn't sound quite right. Swearing in a new language is very hard to do correctly and may seem impolite. Usually we tell *people* to go to hell, not things.

3 Mayıs 2013
Sorry you had a rough day. I hope everything gets better for you.
4 Mayıs 2013

A terrible day

I am vary very upset today. First, W when I returned to my dorm, I put my ipad on the bed to charge it. But when I went sat down on the bed, the ipad fulled fell off the bed.It broken. and broke. a Although it is the is only a minor crack/break in the corner conner, it doesn't looks like not perfect anymore. The second thing is about the partner, I regarded him as a good friend. I can not believe he deleted me; but why?, give me a reason, please. I am a so kind to get along with. Whatever,the bad things can go to hell, for tomorrow is another day, a perfect day.
Thanks for looking it.

3 Mayıs 2013
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