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I am wating your correction!!!!!!!!!!!
I have to describe situations when I had bad and good feelings or sensations.
1. I had a bad experience working with ''toxic" leader. It was a troubled time for me and our team. If I could have, I would have preferred to do the hardest work on the planet in order avoid communicating with that person. Other members of our team had very similar somatic symptoms. After meetings with him we had headaches and felt apathy. We did not feel motivated to work. I usually felt anxiety, helplessnes and deep sadness. I was annoyed and tired.
2. If I think about children, I always feel well! Communication with children is the most interesting for me. It is like an another world. I do not feel anxiety and I am not tired. When I see them smile or I hear their laughter, all problems go away in one moment. My usual feelings when I think about kids are caress, hope, lightness, joy, responsibility, helpfulness, admiration and inspiration.
Great job Aurora! Your English is pretty good :) This is my first time correcting but I hope this helps:
I have to describe situations when I had bad and good feelings or sensations.
1. I have had bad experiences working with ''toxic leader''. This has been a troubled time for my team and I. If I could, I would rather do the hardest work on the planet in that time than communicate with that person. My team and I had very similar somatic symptoms. After meetings with him we felt the onsets of headaches and apathy. We did not want to work. My usually feelings were: anxiety, helpless and deep sadness. I was annoyed and tired.
2. When I think about children I always feel well! Communication with children is the most interesting thing to me. It is as if I am in another world. I do not feel anxiety and I am not tired. When I see children's smiles or I hear children's laughter, in one moment all my problems go away. My usual feelings when I think about kids are: caring, hope, lightness, joy, responsibility, helpfulness, admiration, inspiration, and so much more.
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