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Message of greeting. Hello everyone! In this notebook I want to greet the people who come to my profile and introduce myself to you and also to make sure that I am able to do that without gross mistakes. :) All right, my name is Ivan and I'm from Moscow. I'm here mainly to the fact that learning the English language so far, but in the foreseeable future the list of the studied by me languages will be replenished. The language studying is one of not many things I'm interested in and which give me pleasure from the process. I'm even a little bit sorry for those people who have to step over themselves to study foreign languages against their own will, maybe for a job or for something else, whatever, I mean, without their personal desire. My study of English has been already lasting for 3 years and I really enjoy it and I'm looking for someone who might become my language partner and who I could share the studying with. Sometimes I'm being faced with really difficult things in English that I can't deal with by myself. I would like to find someone who I could ask questions about these things so much because I want to become absolutely fluent at English one day, but I'm unlikely will be succeeded in it without help. There's a funny thing about my studying! I can't remember when I watched a movie not in the English language last. :) I usually turn on the Russian subtitle truck and watch it in English, so that my studying is being more productive. Thanks a lot for your attention on this!
27 May 2013 01:44
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Message of Greeting.  [Capitalize all the "important" words in a title.]

Hello everyone! In this notebook I want to greet the people who come to my profile, and introduce myself to you, and also to make sure that I am able to do that without any gross mistakes. :)
All right, my name is Ivan, and I'm from Moscow. I'm here mainly due to the fact that at the present time I am learning the English language so far, but in the foreseeable future the list of the languages I am studying will be reinforced/supplemented. [1] The Language studying is one of not many things I'm interested in, and which give me pleasure from the process. I'm even a little bit sorry for those people who have to step over themselves to study foreign languages against their own will, maybe for a job or for something else, whatever, I mean, without their personal desire.  [Magnificent sentence!]
My study of English has already lasted for three years, and I really enjoy itand I'm looking for someone who might become my language partner, and with whom I could share the studying with. Sometimes I'm being faced with really difficult things in English that I can't deal with by myself. I would very much like to find someone to whom I could ask questions about these things, because I want to become absolutely fluent in English one day, but I'm unlikely to succeed in it without help.
There's a funny thing about my studying! I can't remember when I last watched a movie not in the English language last. :) I usually turn on the Russian subtitle track and watch it in English, so that my studying is being more productive.
Thanks a lot for your attention on this!

 

[1]  "replenish" would mean that your list of language would grow shorter, and then you would bring it back to its former length.  "reinforce" and (especially) "supplement" mean that something else (other languages) will be <em>added to</em> your knowledge of English.

 

Your post was extremely well written.

27 Mayıs 2013
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