22/6/2013 Ielts WH

My first Ielts is over now.
My speaking test examiner is was a kind bBritish woman. She is was so kind, even if I couldn't follow her when she spoke so fast. And iIt's not unusual that I can't for me not to be able to express what I want to say. At that time, I suddenly stopped and started to eumm and huh err. But nervous seems like never come cross to me. (Sorry I can not understand what you are trying to say here). I was thinking, I didn't know how to say what I wanted to say, and then, I just smiled and looked into her eyes. Even though the main language we use is different, she understood my awkward situation. Her eyes filled with gentleness as she looked into my eyes, and after that, she gave me a big warm and encouraging smile.
Well, although my first Ielts won't be the last one. The experience of taking the test and the good impression of Ielts' examiners are was totally worth it.
The more I study British English and get to know UK culture, the more I want to get to know the UK.

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22/6/2013 Ielts WH

My first Ielts is over now.

My speaking test examiner was a kind British woman. She was very kind, even when I couldn't follow her as she spoke fast. As usual, I couldn't express what I wanted to say and started to emm and huh, but I wasn't nervous.

I was thinking, not knowing how to say what I wanted to say, and then, I just smiled and looked into her eyes. Even though our languages were different, she understood my awkward situation. Her eyes filled with gentleness as she looked into my eyes, and after that, she gave me a big warm and encouraging smile.

Well, although my first Ielts won't be the last one, the experience of taking the test and the good impression (experience) of the Ielts examiners are totally worth it.

The more I study British English and leran about UK culture, the more I want to get to know the UK.