One day in my life
I woke up in 6.45 a.m. It was so hard to did that. But I did it. I went to school. There I have 7 lessons. When I went home I was so tired. I ate and watched TV. Then I read book. Reading help me to relax. And now I'm going to sleep.
THE END
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"One day in my life
I woke up in 6.45 a.m. It was so hard to did that. But I did it. I went to school. There I have 7 lessons. When I went home I was so tired. I ate and watched TV. Then I read book. Reading help me to relax. And now I'm going to sleep.
THE END"
Hmm - generally good, but some rewording would help it flow better!
[Edit:]
Today I woke up at 6:45 a.m. It was so hard to do, but I did it. I went to school where I take 7 classes. When I got home, I was so tired. I ate and watched TV. Afterwards, I read a book. Reading helps me to relax. Now, I'm going to sleep.
THE END
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