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I want to write more and more notes here! People Those here on italki inspire me. I see their aspiration to learn new languages for their work, education or just for fun. even for themselves. I always want to learn smth something new. I like to talk chat with all even if they are seven or seventy 7 and 70 years old. people: with children and old people, because both of them can see These two groups can see that things that we others don't see or just don't notice in our lives... I want to live enjoy my life now!, at this moment, I want to learn to playing the piano, to learn English and to improve my Turkish. I want to learn how to playing chess. I love sports, books, music, dancing, want to and going to the concerts of my favorite singers. because In short, our lives are simply too short!!! I will never go to a Pavorotti's concert and for it breaks my heart. [Anyway, you can't now since he's dead] People around don't understand me. Everybody thinks only about of money, money, and more money! maybe, Perhaps I'm too young and naive now to understand them. But i Still I [Capitalize your 'i's when referring to yourself.  No exception.] don't think that money is the most important thing in our life. And Whenever I come am here, to in italki, .. [There is no two dots but three dots in English.  It's called an "ellipsis"] I think it's feel that I am in another world. where I can find people others like me from the other different countries.   and they This is the place and opportunity to exchange something new with each other. [The way you wrote sounds too selfish] can tell me smth new! Here I can share my thoughts and feelings with them! I'm so happy for to have this place and opportunity!

Correct my mistakes please, I want to see them and understand. Thank you [I don't care what others say.  I treat all essays with a degree of formality.  Since you are learning English, learn the proper way first.  You can write slang etc in your private emails etc.] again! You all are my inspiration! :)

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I want to write more and more notes here! People on italki inspire me, i see their aspiration(Or desire) to learn new languages for their work, education or even for themselves. I always want to learn smth new, i like to communicate(or talk) with people,who are from 7 to 70 years old: with children and old people, because both of them they can see that things that ,which we don't see or just don't notice in our lives.. I want to live my life now, at this moment,I want to learn playing how to play piano, learn English and improve my Turkish and  i want to learn playing how to play chess , .iI love sports, books, music, dances dancing .I want to go visit all the concerts of my favourite singers, because our lives are too short!By the way,i think, i will never go to Pavorotti's concert and it breaks my heart. People around me don't understand me. Everybody thinks only about money, money, money;although ,maybe i'm too young now to understand them. But i don't think that money is the most important thing in our life. And when i came here, to italki.. I think thought it's another world,where i can find people like me from the other countries and they can tell me smth new! I can share my thoughts and feelings with them! I'm so happy for this opportunity! 

Correct my mistakes please, i want to see them and understand. Thank u again! U all are my inspiration! :)