My heart sank.

I often sign in to find a (language) partner. It is really hard. It took me a long time. I am wondering whether there is some problem with my approach / method.
Should I be more cheerful? Should I amend or write more compositions?
I am confused.
My parents just told me, "Take it easy, and you will find a proper friend eventually. Maybe someone will feel your sincerity and help you with your English." This is a consolation, while it does work. It helps me regain confidence.
Anyway, if you want to learn Chinese, I will try my best to help you. The only condition is that you are willing to teach me English.
Thank you for your attention!

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My heart sank.

I often login ID to find a partner.It is really hard .It took me a long time .I am wondering whether there is some problem with what I am doing. <strike>my way. </strike>
Should I be more cheerful?Should I correct <strike>amend</strike> or write more compositions?
I am coufused.
My parents just told me, "Take it easy,and you will find a proper friend <strike>after all</strike>.Maybe someone could feel your sincerity ,and help you with your English."This is a consolation,while it does work.It helps me regain confidence.
Anyway, if you want to learn Chinese, I will try my best to help you.The only condition is that you are willing to teach me English.
Thank you for your attention!

Very good... but very dramatic! haha