Informal e-mail

Hi Jo,

How are you? I hope you're well. Thanks for your last e-mail and sorry for not writing earlier, but I have been very busy.

(new paragraph because the film idea/subject is different)

I think it's a great idea to make a short film about my area because I'm very proud of it! (it is ambiguous - proud of your area or proud of the idea?)  I think you could film the Guggenheim museum because it's very famous and beautiful, and also film our parks (comma and repeated 'film' for clarity). Besides these, you could also (with 'also' here the besides becomes redundant) film the Culture House where people can borrow books, (comma to disconnect study from borrow) or study.

I know two people who (drop the who so you don't need to worry whether it is who/whom) you can interview. One of them is my grandmother; she knows a lot about this area and she could can (since you said 'can interview' rather than 'could interview') tell you what my area was like in the past. The other one is the owner of the oldest pub in my area.

At the beginning of September I have to travel to Madrid because I have a job interview, so I won't be here. I must go now. Write back soon.

love,

Udane