My Daughter

My daughter is a very cute child. She has been is fifteen months old. She can walk well but she can only say a few words like "Mum" "Father". She likes listening to children's songs very much. I bought her a rabbit player which can sing many songs. She listens to it on during the day when she is happy and on at night when she is going to bed. Usually,she smiles sweetly. But sometimes she cries as she wants others to give her something to eat. She likes to eat many foods, for example, biscuits, fruit, fish, meat,porridge and so on. But we have to put her meal under our control her meals. Because if she eats too much food she may be sick easy. Alternatively On the other hand, she doesn't like watching TV program but advertising. All of us loves her so much.

Nicely written text. Lots of good expressions.