I need some help

I am a college student. My name is Michael. I need to practise my oral English but i can't find to a right satisfactory way. Maybe skype is good, but i don't have so many foreignal friends in/using Skype on that. so I'm wondering whether you are willing to add me on to/in Skype so that we can have a nice chat

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I need some help

I am a college student. My name is Michael. I need to practise my oral speaking (or "my speaking skills"), but I can't find to a right good way.  Maybe skype is good, but I don't have so many foreignal foreign friends on that Skype (or just "...friends there"), so I'm waondering ("wander" and "wonder" are different words) whether you are willing to add me on Skype so we can have a nice chat.

Good work.  I'm sure you will find friends to help you.  As for me, I'm trying to learn Spanish.

I Need Some Help

I am a college student. My name is Michael. I need to practise my oral English skills, but I can't find the right way.  Maybe Skype is good, but I don't have very many foreign friends on that; so I'm wondering whether you are willing to add me on Skype so we can have a nice chat.