IELTS Task 1 - Describing chart - Please help me to correct if any mistakes!

Topic: The table below give information on consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.(IELTS Cambridge 7 - Writing Task 1)


The table indicates the variation of consumer spending on three groups of items: Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear, and Leisure/Education. The information was taken in 2002 from five countries, namely, Ireland, Italy, Spain, Turkey, and Sweeden.
Firstly, as we can see from the figures above that Food/Drinks/Tobacco is in the most important position on consumer expenditure for all five of the five countries. To be detailed, the percentage of this kind of expenditure was around 30% in Turkey and Ireland while in the other three countries, it was under 20%.
Secondly, the group of Clothing/Footwear took the second significant slot. Notably, Italy's consumer spending on clothing/footwear has the highest percentage with 9%, while that of Sweden got the lowest percentage with 5.4%.
Finally, expenditure on leisure and education is the least of all three groups of items. since The table shows that in Turkey, the percentage of consumer spending on leisure and education was highest higher than the other countries, but only at 4.35%.
In conclusion, the figures showed in the above table the divergency division of consumer expenditure among various items. The percentage of spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco was highest whereas that on Leisure/Education was lowest.

Your writing is very good! Not all of my changes were necessary but I wanted to help you make an analysis with fewer words. For example, you defined the three categories nicely in your first paragraph but then switched to saying "food, drinks, tobacco" instead of "Food/Drinks/Tobacco". You weren't wrong in doing so, it is just good to keep consistency throughout your writing. Overall I thought your points were made clearly, good job!

IELTS Task 1 - Describing chart - Please help me to correct any mistakes!

Topic: The table below give information on consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.(IELTS Cambridge 7 - Writing Task 1)


The table indicates the variation of consumer spending on a series of items of three group: Food/Drinks/Tobacco, Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education in the five countries, namely Ireland, Italy, Spain (only 3?) in 2002.
Firstly, as we can see from the figures above, food, drinks and tobacco took up the highest percentage of consumer expenditure in all of the countries. In explanation, the percentage of this type of expenditure was around 30% in Turkey and Ireland, while it was under 20% in the other three countries.
Secondly, clothing and footwear took the second-most significant slot. This is showed especially on Italian consumer spending, where clothing/footwear has the highest percentage with 9%, while Sweden shows the lowest percentage of spenditure with only 5.4% of consumer spenditure(It is important to remind them of what the percentage is from).
Finally, expenditure on leisure and education is the least out of the three groups of items. According to the table, in Turkey, the percentage of consumer spending on leisure and education was highest with only 4.35%.
In conclusion, the figures in the above table showed the differences of consumer expenditure on various items. The percentage of spending on food, drinks and tobacco was highest whereas that on leisure and education was lowest.