El 麦霸
我等一天无愤恨. 今天是星期三。世界变化,我说说乌克兰的情况。最新新闻不好。人类是挺疯的一定。我希望俄罗斯,乌克兰,美国和别的国会的得出的结论。人们不能和不了解住协议。世界是每一个人的宿舍,所以我们必须爱此。我不要战争。我觉得俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人和欧洲人不必须争吵。我等一天无愤恨。 让我们安居乐业吧!(Today is Wednesday. The World is changing. I mean the situation in Ukraine. The latest news is not good. Humanity is so crazy. I hope that Russians, Ukrains, Americans and other countries. Why can't people live in harmony? The world is hostel, so we ought to respect each other. I don'r want to a war. I think Russians, Ukrains, Americans and Europeans must not quarrel. I'm waiting for a day without evil. Let's live in peacful!)
5 Mar 2014 14:38
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我等一天无愤恨.

今天是星期三。世界变化,(世界正在变化)我说说(我指)乌克兰的情况。最新新闻不好(最近的新闻很糟糕)。人类是挺疯的一定(人类是如此疯狂)。我希望俄罗斯,乌克兰,美国和别的国会的得出的结论。人们不能和不了解住协议。(为什么人类不能和谐相处?)世界是每一个人的宿舍,所以我们必须爱此(必须尊重彼此)。我不要战争。我觉得俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人和欧洲人不必须(一定不要)争吵。我等一天无愤恨。(我在等待没有邪恶的一天) 让我们安居乐业吧!(Today is Wednesday. The World is changing. I mean the situation in Ukraine. The latest news is not good. Humanity is so crazy. I hope that Russians, Ukrains, Americans and other countries.(you didnt finish this sentence, so I cant correct the Chinese version for you) Why can't people live in harmony? The world is hostel, so we ought to respect each other. I don'r want to a war. I think Russians, Ukrains, Americans and Europeans must not quarrel. I'm waiting for a day without evil. Let's live in peacful!)

5 Mart 2014
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我等一天无愤恨.我期待没有邪恶的一天

今天是星期三。世界(正在改变)变化,我说的是乌克兰的情况。最新新闻很不乐观不好人类是挺疯的一定(人类是如此的疯狂)。我希望俄罗斯,乌克兰,美国和别的国会的得出的结论。(?我希望俄罗斯,乌克兰,美国还有别的国家达成一致)人们(为什么不能和谐相处呢)不能和不了解住协议。世界是(一间旅馆)每一个人的宿舍,所以我们(应该彼此尊重)必须爱此。我不要战争。我觉得俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人和欧洲人不必须(决不能)争吵。我等一天无愤恨(我期待没有邪恶的一天)。 让我们安居乐业(和平共处)吧!(Today is Wednesday. The World is changing. I mean the situation in Ukraine. The latest news is not good. Humanity is so crazy. I hope that Russians, Ukrains, Americans and other countries. Why can't people live in harmony? The world is hostel, so we ought to respect each other. I don'r want to a war. I think Russians, Ukrains, Americans and Europeans must not quarrel. I'm waiting for a day without evil. Let's live in peacful!)

 

5 Mart 2014

我等一天无愤恨.

今天是星期三。世界变化,我说说乌克兰的情况。最新新闻不好。人类是挺疯的一定。我希望俄罗斯,乌克兰,美国和别的国会的得出的结论。人们不能和不了解住协议。世界是每一个人的宿舍,所以我们必须爱此。我不要战争。我觉得俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人和欧洲人不必须争吵。我等一天无愤恨。 让我们安居乐业吧!(Today is Wednesday. The World is changing. I mean the situation in Ukraine. The latest news is not good. Humanity is so crazy. I hope that Russians, Ukrains, Americans and other countries. Why can't people live in harmony? The world is hostel, so we ought to respect each other. I don'r want to a war. I think Russians, Ukrains, Americans and Europeans must not quarrel. I'm waiting for a day without evil. Let's live in peacful!)

 

 

我期待有一天世界不再有仇恨

今天是星期三,世界形势急剧变化,我指的是乌克兰的形势。最新的消息很糟糕。人类是真是疯狂。

I hope that Russians, Ukrains, Americans and other countries.(what do you hope these countries to do?reach a conciliatory consensus?)我希望俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人以及世界其他各国人民可以达成和解。

为什么人们不能和谐相处。

The world is hostel, so we ought to respect each other.(why do u metaphorze wolrd into hotel?maybe u can say the wolrd is homestead。 )世界是每一个人的家园,我们应当彼此尊重。

我不想要战争,我认为俄罗斯人,乌克兰人,美国人和欧洲人必须停止争吵。我期待有一天世界再无罪恶。让我们和平共处吧。

 

(in your passage,you used Russians,Americans,,,I think you should use Russia,America,,弄just use the name of that country.)

22 Mart 2014
同样希望世界和平
7 Mart 2014
里面有太多种族情感和道德挑战
6 Mart 2014
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