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My family ha[s] a business related t[o] frozen[ ]foods. We make lasagn[a] and other Italian food [products] to sell in supermarkets. But [u]nlike industrial food[s], [ours] is homemade [an]d [healt]h[y. My m]o[ther] command[s] the kitchen, w[it]h [ass]is[tanc]e [from] an employee. My father manage[s] the business and d[eli]ver[s] the products.
[Currently,] we are selling just in our city and th[e n]e[arby] region[,] but we want to expand to other cit[ie]s. For that[,] we need to buy some machines to r[a]ise production and [build] up our small enterprise.
You can [visit] our page on [F]acebook [a]t the following link. Visit us, make your request[,] and enjoy!] =D
Kin[d] regards!
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My family ha<ve> a business related <wi>t<h> frozen<->foods. We make lasagn<es> and other Italian<s> food to sell in supermarkets. < it is> n<ot >lik<e an unh>e<althy> industrial food, <it> is< a> homemade <foo>d<.> <W>ho command the kitchen< is my mother>, wh<o> is< help>e<d> <by> an employee. My father manage the business and <han>d< o>ver the products.
<Presently> we are selling just in our city and the regi<on ar>o<u>n<d> but we want to expand< it> to other cit<y>s. For that we need to buy some machines to ris<e th>e production and <grow> up our small enterprise.
You can <know> our page on <f>acebook t<hrough> the following link. Visit us, make your request and <like it.> =D
Kin<g> regards!
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