Eszter
自我介绍
大家好！
我叫Eszter，今年二十二岁。我来自匈牙利。我是大学生，我的专业是工商管理。我喜欢听歌，看电影，看书，旅游。我刚开始学习中文。
19 Ağu 2014 15:52
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自我介绍
大家好！
我叫Eszter，今年二十二岁, 我来自匈牙利。現在我是个大学生，我的专业是工商管理。我喜欢听歌，看电影，看书 和旅游, 我刚刚开始学习中文。
You don't need to start every sentence or phrase with "I" or "My". It is understood. Makes your writing like a kid's. Anyway, you got the grammar and structure well. You have learnt well.
19 Ağustos 2014
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自我介绍
大家好！
我叫Eszter，今年二十二岁。我来自匈牙利。我是大学生，我的专业是工商管理。我喜欢听歌 音乐，看电影，看书，旅游。我刚开始学习中文。
19 Ağustos 2014
谢谢！你的英语很好。加油！
24 Ağustos 2014
Hello~ I think your Chinese is very well. but,strictly speaking,we use “、” this punctuation to Instead of “ ，” in this case（to express parallel）,we call it “顿号[dùn hào]”,and it not exist in English. “我是一名大学生，我的专业是工商管理。我喜欢听歌、看电影、看书和旅游。”
I’m a college student too,I major in Marketing.(I‘m sorry my English is poor,I spend many times to translate there sentence,and I don't know if I express it clearly.)
20 Ağustos 2014
It is good. don't need to correct. come on
20 Ağustos 2014
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