Vicky77
In my point of view
Our instantaneous reactions and deliberate thoughts may differ dramatically so we'd better make decisions after second thoughts.
21 Ağu 2014 14:05
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In my point of view
Our instantaneous reactions and deliberate thoughts may differ dramatically, so we'd better make decisions after second thoughts.
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This is great! You need a comma after "dramatically" because you are linking two independant clauses with a conjunction.
Another way you could say it is "Our instantaneous reactions may differ dramatically from our deliberate reflections , so we'd better make decisions after second thoughts."
21 Ağustos 2014
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