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My weekend! One of my favorite hobbies is playing in a rock band, last weekend the band had a show in Toluca which is part of State México, in the show other rock bands were going to play. We traveled for two hours to arrive at the place, we got lost as is common, that's why we didn't arrive at time, we thought the concert had already begun but it wasn't, because some musical equipment hadn't arrived yet. Fortunately many people had not arrived yet. The concert was free and was done to give a positive message to people who was there, because in that place there are a lot of guys who has bad vices such as drugs, alcohol, etc. The concert begun, the first band was a local band, the other bands came from many diferent parts of México, the bands's songs sounded great, I liked them a lot. Our band was the penultime in play - before getting on the stage I get nervous, it is common in me, but then when I am on the stage the nerves goes out and I enjoy it - We finish at 8 pm and at the end all the bands took photos, you know the memories, I met a lot people, it was great! I hope your corrections, thank you :)
22 Ağu 2014 18:36
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It would be very nice. If you post your show picture here in your notebook entry. Anyway.nice job. Congratulations :)
22 Ağustos 2014

My Weekend!

One of my favorite hobbies is playing in a rock band, last weekend the band had a show in Toluca which is part of State México., in the show Other rock bands were going to play too. We traveled for two hours to get there, arrive at the place, we got lost as is common, and didn't arrive on time.that's why we didn't arrive at time, We thought the concert had already begun but it hadn't wasn't, because some musical equipment hadn't arrived yet. Fortunately many people had not arrived yet. The concert was free and was done held  to give a positive message to the audience people who was there, because in Toluca that place there are many guys a lot of guys who have bad vices such as drugs, and alcohol, etc. The concert began, the first band was a local band, the other bands came from many different parts of México., The bands's songs sounded great, I liked them a lot. Our band was the penultimate piece penultime in play - before getting on the stage I got nervous, it is common in for me, but then when I am on the stage the nerves disappear goes out and I enjoy it. - We finished at 8 pm and at the end all the bands took photos, you know the memories, I met a lot people, it was great!
I hope your will corrections, this. Thank you. :)

22 Ağustos 2014
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