Nana
nice to meet you My name is Nana Matsumya.I'm 32 old. I'm from Japan. I'm study English. because …I talk to more then people.but English the more difficult. I have a motivation is down down down. But to not give up. I can't try study
18 Kas 2014 03:16
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nice to meet you

My name is Nana Matsumya.I'm 32 years old. I'm from Japan.
I'm studying English. because …<em>I talk to more then people. </em><- I don't understand what you are trying to say here.

<em></em>but English is the more difficult. I have a My motivation is down down down.
But I do to not give up. I can't try to study

 

<em>Good work!  You did said a lot of things well.</em>

18 Kasım 2014
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Nice to meet you

My name is Nana Matsumya. I'm 32 years old. I'm from Japan.
I'm studying English. because …I want to talk to more then people but English the is more very difficult. My have motivation is down down down.
But to I will not give up.

 

I can't try study. <-Not sure exactly what you were trying to say. Maybe 「I will keep trying to study」 is what you were trying to say?

 

Very good first journal! You had the majority of things in all the right places. Most of your problems were tense related and that will come with time and practice reading and writing. The only other problem was using the right synonyms (similar words) which will also come with practice. Keep at it and you will do great!

18 Kasım 2014
hi my name is jasim and i want conversession with u if don't mid
18 Kasım 2014
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18 Kasım 2014
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