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What don't you like on TV? This is another essay, this time it is about what the tittle says. Lately I saw a program that is a live-show kind announced on TV. It was about young people with more than 18 years old, that has nothing better to do in sommer that spent 3 months in a house with other 5 people. Everything that would happen will be filmed, that was what the announce said. When the show started you could see that the only purpose of such a thing was to see how a bunch of well-grown people acted like teenagers. They figthed for everything, they seemed to unknow how to live with people as lezy as them. That wasn`t the top theme of the programm. The main thing was how they got sexually envolved with anyone they could. I want to expose this and wonder how can we accept and furthermor econcurage this behaviour in youth by showing and announcing it on TV. You wouldn't believe it but it has a lot of followers. What does this says about us? Why the cultural programms aren't that popular?

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What don't you like on TV?

This is another essay, this time it is about what the tittle says.

Lately Recently, I saw a program that is a live-show kind announced on TV. It was about young people with who are more than 18 years old, that has nothing better to do in summer that spent 3 months in a house with other 5 people. Everything that would happen will be filmed, that was what the announce said.

When the show started you could see that the only purpose of such a thing was to see how a bunch of well fully-grown people acted like teenagers.

They figthed for about everything, they seemed to not unknow how to live with people as lazy as they. That wasn`t the top theme of the programm. The main thing was how they got sexually involved with anyone they could.

I want to share this and wonder how can we accept and furthermor econcurage this behaviour in youth by showing and announcing it on TV. You wouldn't believe it but it has a lot of followers. What does this says about us? Why the cultural programms aren't that popular?

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