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Long time no writing Longtime no writing! While I haven’t wrote note, very sad accident has happened in Syria. Two Japaneses were been captured by ISIS and been used for threatening Japanese government. Finally these hostages were killed and a lot of people felt so sad for them. But on the other hand, the act that they went into Syria although it was very dangerous and the Japanese Foreign Ministry advised not to go there has been a object of argument. Some one said that the all responsibility belonged to themselves and Japanese government shouldn't do any negotiation with the Islamic state. This is ,what is called, the theory of "self-responsibility". And the others said the government should do the best to rescue them just because they are Japanese. Like this, opinions of people separated into 2 types in Japan. And I think Japan, which is not allowed to have military by constitution, face with the serious problem how to protect us from terrorism.

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Long Time no Write

※Not correct, but a play on the phrase "long time no see" so acceptable

 

While I haven’t wrote note Since I wrote my last note, a very sad accident has happened in Syria. Two Japaneses were been captured by ISIS and been used for threatening to threaten the Japanese government.

※Japanese government is implied from context, so just government works


Finally However these hostages were killed and a lot of people felt so sad for them. But on the other hand, the act that they went their act of going into Syria although it was very dangerous and the Japanese Foreign Ministry advised not to go there has been a object of argument. Some one said that the all responsibility belonged to themselves and the Japanese government shouldn't do any negotiation negotiate with the Islamic state. This is ,what is called, the theory of "self-responsibility". And the others said the government should do the its best to rescue them just because they are Japanese. Like this, This is how different opinions separated people opinions of people separated into 2 types in Japan. And I think Japan, which is not allowed to have military by constitution, is faced with the serious problem how to protect us from terrorism.

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