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climb mountains I climbed kite's mouth mountain with my friends last week. It's four-day weekends, so it's very crowded everywhere. We waited other people who used mountaineering rope for ages. We have a picnic on mountain ridge. Many people kept encouraging us to climb all the way on the mountain. We went to the summit successfully. 上禮拜去爬鳶嘴山,沒想到連假爬山也可以塞在山路上,只好一邊等一邊野餐, 但也遇到很多山友鼓勵,順利完成第二個小百岳!
5 Mar 2015 08:08
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Climb Mountains

I climbed Kite's Mouth mountain with my friends last week.
It's It was a four-day weekends, so it's was very crowded everywhere.
We waited for other people who used the mountaineering rope for ages.
We have had a picnic on mountain ridge.
Many people kept encouraging us to climb all the way on up the mountain.
We went to the summit successfully.

上禮拜去爬鳶嘴山,沒想到連假爬山也可以塞在山路上,只好一邊等一邊野餐,
但也遇到很多山友鼓勵,順利完成第二個小百岳

 

That sounds really fun! I like climbing too. In English, we always capitalize proper nouns like the names of mountains, landmarks, people, etc. Also, when you're telling a story that already happened in the past, you have to keep using the past tense for every verb. But this is good!

6 Mart 2015
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