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A NIGHT It was a could dark October night, James and Sarah were walking nervously in the countryside when suddenly a big bear went out of a tree they were face a face with the big animal, but they could not run, Their legs were trembling with fear. When Sarah went out of the shock she grabbed the hand to James and They started running by the dark night Their face were white as a paper. They were sitting under a tree. James said: "Thanks Sarah" , and the answer of Sarah was a smile and she said: " James, you are the most important in my life". They touched their hands, but the fear was greater with the minutes and hours. The sounds in the night were stronger, these sounds came from many animals very dangerous. Their bodies trembling with fear and the night has not end. They didn't know that the bear was still there, when suddenly the bear bit him hand, James was very bad because he lost a lot of blood, the bear disappeared because he hear a shot; Sarah takes off his jacket and put it in the hand of James to decrease hemorragea. The next morning very early are found by a rescue group, They carry to James and Sarah to the hospital. Doctor tells James that his hand will not have mobility, James takes a few months to recover emotionally and succeeds with the help of Sarah.

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A LONG NIGHT

It was a could cold dark October night. James and Sarah were walking nervously in the countryside when suddenly a big bear went came out of a tree. They were face a to face with the big animal, but they could not run. Their legs were trembling with fear. When Sarah went out of recovered from the shock she grabbed the hand to James' hand and they started running by through the darkness. night Their faces were white as a paper.


Later, when they were sitting under a tree. James said: "Thanks Thank you Sarah" , and the answer of Sarah was answered with a smile and she said: " James, you are the most important thing in my life". They touched their hands, but the their fear was greater growing as with the minutes and hours ticked by. The sounds in of the night were getting stronger. these The sounds came from many very dangerous animals.


Their bodies were trembling with fear and the night has had not yet ended. end. They didn't know that the bear was still there, when and suddenly the bear it bit him James' hand, James He was very bad in trouble because he had lost a lot of blood. The bear disappeared because when he hear heard a shot. Sarah takes took off his James' jacket and put tied it in around his the injured hand of James to decrease hemorragea to stop the hemorrhaging.


The next morning, very early, are they were found by a rescue group, They who carry to took them James and Sarah to the hospital. ('carry' is only correct if they put them on a stretcher, or actually carried them.)


The doctor tells James that his hand will not have lose all mobility. James takes a few months to recover emotionally and succeeds with the help of Sarah Over a few months, with Sarah's help, he makes a full emotional, if not physical, recovery.

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