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Soccer.
It's really difficult to describe how important soccer is for Latin American people, it's something we have in our blood probably or it's just the fact we grew up with this sport and that why we care so much for it.
Today as a regular weekend, I had my soccer match with my friends and I have to say it's the best week's moment moment of the week [this sounds more natural], it's bracing exciting and relaxing after a hard week of work. It's weird to think that when I was in Canada, I didn't miss my country too much my country, my friends and my family, but what I really missed was playing soccer. I played it of course but not many times and when the winter arrived, practice it was quite challenging, Canadian winter doens't doesn't let you to do many things outdoors but it create gave me the opportunity of getting to get involved with others sport like skating and snowboarding that I actually loved.
Meanwhile I'm going to continious continue practicing soccer, I'm 27 years old so I have to saize seize every moment because playing any sport with a high intensity it's is not a everlasting moment.
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Soccer.
It's really difficult to describe how important soccer is for Latin American people, it's something we have in our blood probably or it's just the fact we grew up with this sport and that is why we care so much for about it.
Today as is a regular weekend, I had my soccer match with my friends and I have to say it's the best moment of the week's moment, it's bracing and relaxing after a hard week of work. It's weird to think that when I was in Canada, I didn't miss too much of my country, my friends and or my family, but what I really missed was playing soccer. I played it of course but not many time much and when the winter arrived, practice it (or practicing it) was quite challenging, Canadian winters doens't don't let you to do many things outdoors but it create gave me the opportunity of getting involved with others sports like skating and snowboarding that I actually loved.
Meanwhile I'm going to continious contiune practicing soccer, I'm 27 years old so I have to seize every moment because playing any sport with at a high intensity it's is not a everlasting moment (does not last forever is probably better here).
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Please help me with your correction, I would really appreciate it
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