Please check my Grammar from the story "The Wonderful Memory." When I was young, I didn’t have much memory about playing with my father. Because my father was always busy. He has a lot of business. But I have once memory that will be a place in my heart forever. One day on holiday, when I was four, my family was picnicking in a park near my house. I can remember. When my father asked me to play with him. He asked me “ what do you want to play ? Today I am free for you all day.” I was so excited but I had no idea about a game at the moment. Finally, my father advised to play hide and seek. In the first time, I didn’t know what is about hide and seek. My father told me to hide and don’t move until he found me. I am understand what he said. I chose a tree to be a place for hiding. I hid behind it. My father closed his eyes and began counting to ten. Then, he slowly opened his eyes and looked around. I hold my breath at the moment. I was excited to be found, but he didn’t see me. Then, he turned left and walked straight to found me on another way. I can remember. It was the first time to play hide and seek between me and my father. It was the wonderful time. Even he took a long time to found me. It was around an hour before he found me slept behind the tree. Is that funny right? This is a wonderful memory ever between me and my father.