Eybelle
長かと居と Osaka and Kyoto
私はイベルです。２２歳です。せんしゅうにきょととおさかにいきました。おさかでたこやきをたべました。たこやきをおいしいかった。
I am Eybelle. I am 22 years old. Last week I went to Kyoto and Osaka. I ate Takoyaki in Osaka. The Takoyaki was delicious.
22 May 2015 00:04
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長かと居とおおさかときょうと Osaka and Kyoto
私はイベルです。２２歳です。せんしゅうに、きょときょうととおさかおおさかにいきました。おさかおおさかでたこやきをたべました。たこやきをはおいしいかった。
I am Eybelle. I am 22 years old. Last week I went to Kyoto and Osaka. I ate Takoyaki in Osaka. The Takoyaki was delicious.
Your writing was really good. There were no major mistakes.
Keep up the good work!
P.S. I'm glad to hear that you had a good time in Osaka and Kyoto.
22 Mayıs 2015
Kanji para おおさか y きょうと son 大阪 y 京都, pero no tienes que usar los kanji que todavía no sabes.
22 Mayıs 2015
Hola, muy buen trabajo y espero que sigas disfrutando tu viaje.
22 Mayıs 2015
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Eybelle
Dil Becerileri
İngilizce, Japonca, İspanyolca
Öğrenim Dili
Japonca
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