Travelling abroad

Travelling abroad have a lot of positive effects in our lives, that makes us more open-minded.

It allows us to improve our language skills and gives us valuable experiences which then can affect our lifestyles.

Furthermore, it is an experience, which is not determined by the quantity of money you spend.

Moreover, the best trips are always the ones in which you take your backpack and go walking through the cities, and where you mingle with locals.

Well, it is my personal opinion, what do you think about this?

Travelling abroad

Travelling abroad have has a lot of positive effects in our lives, that makes make us more open-minded, allows allow us to improve our language skills and gives give us valuable experiences which affect our lifestyles.

Furthermore, it is an experience which it is not proportional with the quantity of money you spend. Moreover, the best trips are always the ones in which you take your backpack and go walking through the cities in an environment where you can mix with native people.
Well, it is my personal opinion, what do you think about it?

Note: Effects (plural) that make, allow and give us... 

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