Miriam
Letter Hi Max! I write to you because I've has just joined a club near my house, it's a sport club, there are swimming-pool, tennis courts and football fields. You should visit me, we can play a football match with my friends. I hope that we have a good time! See you soon! Miriam
3 Tem 2015 16:24
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Hi Max!
I write to you because I've has just joined a club near my house, it's a sport club, there are is a swimming pool, and there are tennis courts and football fields. You should visit me. We can play a football match with my friends.
I hope that we have a good time! you can join us! (The English was correct in the previous statement, but it would be unnatural to say that)
See you soon!
Miriam

 

Your English is very good! 

3 Temmuz 2015
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