我的假期
假期的时候我不用上班，但是(/然而)我喜欢早起床。我每天六点起床，我洗澡、穿衣服、吃早饭(/餐)，然后我在森林裡或者山上散步。我九点時(習慣)去一座咖啡馆。(我)在那里一边喝一杯咖啡一边看报纸。到了十点我就回家了。(／十點時, 我離開。)
在爱尔兰的<em>假期</em>天气很冷，而且下著雨。我和女儿一起钓尋找螃蟹的蹤跡(perhaps you don't really catch crabs~"抓"螃蟹)。有的时候我们在海滩玩儿(/玩耍 used in Taiwan)，找海壳(/貝殼 that we often use in Taiwan, especially mean the beautiful ones without lives in them)。
When on holidays I don’t go to work, however I like to get up early. Every day I get up at 6， I wash, get dressed and have breakfast. After I walk in the forests or the mountains. At 9 I go to a café. There I have a coffee while I read the newspaper. At 10 I come home. In Ireland on holidays the weather is cold, and it rains. My daughter and I <em>fish for尋找 </em>crabs. Sometimes we play on the beach, look for shells.
<em>There are no big problems and your expressions in Chinese are quite clear. I just provide you some spoken ones to make the sentences more fluent. Good job! Expect the end...</em>
我的假期
虽然假期的时候我不用上班。但是我还是喜欢早起床。我每天六点起床，我洗澡，穿衣服，吃早饭后,。然后就去在森林或者山上散步;。我九点去一座咖啡馆,。我在那里一边喝一杯咖啡一边看报纸;。我十点回家。这次假期在爱尔兰的天气很冷，而且又下雨，所以没怎么去户外活动，只和女儿一起去钓了螃蟹,有的时候我们在去海滩玩儿，找找海壳。
When on holidays I don’t go to work, however I like to get up early. Every day I get up at 6， I wash, get dressed and have breakfast. After I walk in the forests or the mountains. At 9 I go to a café. There I have a coffee while I read the newspaper. At 10 I come home. In Ireland on holidays the weather is cold, and it rains. My daughter and I fish for crabs. Sometimes we play on the beach, look for shells.
我的假期
虽然假期的时候[or you can put 虽然 here also if you put a comma before it] 我不須要上班。但是我喜欢早起床 - [understood]我每天六点起床，我洗个澡，穿衣后而服，吃早饭。然后我在森林或者山下 上散步。我九点时在去一座咖啡馆。我那里一边喝一杯咖啡一边看报纸。我十点回家。假期在爱尔兰的假期时节, 天气是很冷的，而且也会下雨。我和父女兩人在儿一起钓螃蟹, 有的时候我们在海滩玩耍儿，或寻觅找海壳。
Can't translate word for word as in English because of cultural biases :)
When on holidays I don’t go to work, however I like to get up early. Every day I get up at 6， I wash, get dressed and have breakfast. After I walk in the forests or the mountains. At 9 I go to a café. There I have a coffee while I read the newspaper. At 10 I come home. In Ireland on holidays the weather is cold, and it rains. My daughter and I fish for crabs. Sometimes we play on the beach, look for shells.
我的假期
假期的时候我不去上班。但是我喜欢早起床。我每天六点起床，我洗澡，穿衣服，吃早饭。然后我在森林或者山上散步。我九点去一间咖啡馆。在那里一边喝咖啡、一边看报纸。十点回家。假期在爱尔兰天气很冷，而且下雨。我和女儿一起钓螃蟹。有的时候我们在海滩玩儿，找海壳。
When on holidays I don’t go to work, however I like to get up early. Every day I get up at 6， I wash, get dressed and have breakfast. After I walk in the forests or the mountains. At 9 I go to a café. There I have a coffee while I read the newspaper. At 10 I come home. In Ireland on holidays the weather is cold, and it rains. My daughter and I fish for crabs. Sometimes we play on the beach, look for shells.
我的假期
假期的时候（虽然）我不上班。但是我喜欢早（点）起床。我每天六点起床，然后洗澡，穿衣服，吃早饭。然后我在森林或者山上散步。九点我会去一家咖啡馆。我会在那里一边喝咖啡一边看报纸。我十点回家。假期的时候爱尔兰天气很冷，而且还下雨。我和女儿一起钓螃蟹。有的时候我们会在海滩玩儿，找贝壳。
When on holidays I don’t go to work, however I like to get up early. Every day I get up at 6， I wash, get dressed and have breakfast. After I walk in the forests or the mountains. At 9 I go to a café. There I have a coffee while I read the newspaper. At 10 I come home. In Ireland on holidays the weather is cold, and it rains. My daughter and I fish for crabs. Sometimes we play on the beach, look for shells.
