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The Food The food is very important for the our alimentation. Today often the food is produced by the industry, I think that this food is danger for our health. But I see many people who are taking a different turn, and are becoming more careful when buying things or biological zero kilometer. What do you think?
4 Eki 2015 15:04
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The Food is very important for the our (alimentation/nourishment - or better say health). Today often the food is often produced (by the industry/artificially), I think that this kind of food is dangerous for our health. But I see many people who are taking a different turn, and are becoming more careful/aware when buying things or biological zero kilometer?. What do you think?

 

General nouns like food, cats, life, happiness don't come with 'the'.

ex: Cats meow. Life is good. Food is important.

It is better to avoid using 'today' and 'often' next to one another.

 

Good! I hope to read elaborate notes from you!

6 Ekim 2015
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