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✿Mizuki✿
The Osaka city's night. Hi. I finished a work. I catched a cold. But I'm fine. I will talk about plan of my future. I will go to the college again, because I want the license of elementary school. I want to relieve my mom. I have to go to college for 2 years. Exam subject are Japanese, English and Music. It is march 28 at next year. I have to study harder than ever. I'm glad that if you correct my notebook. I thought something while saw the Osaca city view. Thank you for reading! If you find a mistake inmy notebook, could you correct it please? It was so beautiful.

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The Osaka city's at night.

Hi. I finished a work.
I catched caught a cold. But I'm fine.
I will talk about my plans of my for the future.
I will go to the college again, because I want an the license of elementary school license.
I want to relieve help my mom out.
I have to go to college for 2 years.
Exam subjects are Japanese, English and Music.
It is on march 28 at next year.
I have to study harder than ever.

I'm glad that I'd be happy if you could correct my notebook.

I thought something while when i saw the Osaca Osaka city view.

Thank you for reading!
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it please?
It was so beautiful.

 

 

Only a few small corrections needed =) and that's a wonderful picture, it looks lovely over there.

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♫Leah♫ Thank you! Do you like it?ヽ(^ω^)ノ
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That's a cool picture, Mizuki!
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Thank you frank(*'ω`*)!
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Good for you

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