Paulo Ribeiro
Profesyonel Öğretmen
The Evil Scientist I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget… I kept behind the counter, trying to keep unseen from that point. At the same time I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man, in doctor’s clothing, was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was another man all in white clothes. I was appalled to see,the man was tied to the chair. Shocked, I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. Before I decided to do something to interfere it was late. The doctor had already pulling the syringe off. For an entire minute the man in chair stood motionless...
25 Kas 2015 01:43
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The Evil Scientist

I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget…
I kept behind the counter, trying to keep (or, remain) unseen from that point (or, position). At the same time, I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man in doctor’s clothing was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was (or, sat) another man dressed all (or, entirely) in white clothes. I was appalled to see that the man was tied to the chair. Shocked (or, In a state of shock), I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. By the time I decided to do something to interfere, it was too late. The doctor had already pulled the syringe off. For an entire minute, the man in chair sat motionless...

 

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Very creative and well written! 

25 Kasım 2015
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