Discusses the reasons why people prefer to live in big cities in china.

In China, most people prefer to live in city rather than countryside, even though the pollution of city is so serious that make people less healthy. Leaving old families at countryside, millions of young people move into the city to a flashy and totally new life. Villages witness its own declination. This essay will illustrate some reasons for that strange condition of China.

One of the obviously reasons is that Chinese government public a series of policies to encourage people move into cities. Considering that factories that are located near cities need a large number of workers and people from village could cover this shortage, the Chinese government makes a lot of favorable terms to persuade countryside citizens to work in the cities and find a nest there. Take renting a flat as an example, village citizens could rent a same flat with a relatively lower price than general person. On the other side, village citizens who generally have a poor living standard could earn more money when they work in the city. With plenty of low-paid workers, china is creating huge profits and developing in the highest pace in the world.

Besides, the convenient city’s life also attracts people to pour into city. Shopping is one of the examples. Urban citizens can buy what they want at any time in city. And there are millions kinds of goods are salt in the shopping mall. Furthermore, provided with various kinds of public transportation, such as bus, train, subway and airplane, urban citizens will reach their destination in relatively short time. In addition, children are supposed to be received education just around their community with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in the village.

The last reason that most Chinese prefer to find a nest in big city is that citizens traditionally consider that living in big city could represent their social standard. Firstly, there are more job positions in big cities and the pay is more decent. So urban citizens are supposed to be richer. Besides, receiving higher quality education and having more opportunities to get accesses to new things, urban citizens always have wider horizon to the world. All these things make people living in countryside urge to find a cozy home in city.

In conclusion, in order to improve their living standard and have promising future, most Chinese citizens choose to live in city. In the next 10 years, with the development of china, cities of china will become more crowded.

A discussion of the reasons people prefer to live in big cities in china.

In China, most people prefer to live in a city rather than the countryside, even though the pollution of city is so serious that it makes people less healthy. Leaving old families in the countryside, millions of young people move into the city to begin/start a totally new life. Villages decline. This essay will illustrate some reasons for this strange condition of China. 

One of the more obvious reasons is that the Chinese government has enacted/implemented a series of policies to encourage people to move into cities. Considering that factories that are located near cities need a large number of workers and people from village could cover this shortage, the Chinese government has made a lot of favorable terms to persuade countryside citizens to work in the cities and find a home there. To take renting a flat as an example, village citizens can rent a similar/equivalent flat for a relatively lower price than the general public. In addition, village citizens who generally have a poor living standard can earn more money when they work in the city. With plenty of low-paid workers, China is creating huge profits and developing at the highest pace in the world. 

Besides, the convenient city life also encourages people to pour into the city. Shopping is one example (of these conveniences). Urban citizens can buy what they want at any time in the city. Millions kinds of goods are found in the shopping mall. Furthermore, provided with various kinds of public transportation, such as bus, train, subway and airplane, urban citizens can reach their destination in relatively short time Good sentence.. In addition, children can receive education in their community which is of a higher quality compared with their counterparts who live in the village. 

The last reason that most Chinese prefer to find a home in a big city is that citizens traditionally consider that living in a big city could improve? their social standing? Firstly, there are more job positions in big cities and the pay is more decent, so urban citizens are supposed to be richer. Besides, receiving higher quality education and having more opportunities to get accesses to new things, urban citizens always have a wider horizon on the world. All these things make people living in the countryside want to find a cozy home in the city.

In conclusion, in order to improve their living standard and have a promising future, most Chinese citizens choose to live in the/a city. In the next 10 years, with the development of China, the cities of China will become more crowded.

Fantastic essay overall, well developed argument and some great sentence structures in there. Be careful with those articles though (A and The), they can be tricky!